Sunday, September 25, 2011

Close Reading of a Passage


“But where were my friends and relations? No father had watched my infant days, no mother had blessed me with smiles and caresses; or if they had, all my past life was now a blot, a blind vacancy in which I distinguished nothing. From my earliest remembrance I had been as I then was in height and proportion. I had never yet seen a being resembling me, or who claimed any intercourse with me. What was I? The question again recurred, to be answered only with groans,” (Shelley 81).

The above passage stood out in the novel Frankenstein as being important. This passage highlights the monster’s struggle within him as he tries to find meaning, purpose, and his place in the world. At this point in the story the monster not sure about his place in the world. His beginnings are a stark contrast to his creator Frankenstein’s childhood described earlier in the tale. Frankenstein grew up happy with his family and companions. The monster never grew up with a family or friends so he has never had any relationships with others. No one has shown him affection or interaction.  
The monster struggles with the realization that he’s alone and people hate him. He tries to understand the world because he is curious. This passage shows he wants to know who he is and his place in the world. Later on he realizes how alone he is even with his “protectors “nearby. He has no link to others as he can only communicate with “groans”. He is an ugly wretched looking monster and wants to know why his creator did this to him. And he feels helpless because no one taught him how to survive. He becomes angry and blames mankind. His hatred is created from humans treating him as a monster. He isn’t a monster but he feels pushed to become this.
Humans will not give this creature the companionship he craves. He later asks his creator Frankenstein to create a companion because he needs another being like himself to share the world with who won’t hate him. This passage contributes to the meaning of the novel by providing the monster’s thoughts on his backstory with the fact that he came from nothing.   

Link to an article on why loneliness is bad. 

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Sunday, September 18, 2011

Draft of Essay #2


The Second Coming: Analysis

“Turning and turning in the widening gyre/ The falcon cannot hear the falconer” (Yeats lines 1-2). Starting right with the first two lines of the poem the correct use of language by the author is used to evoke such fantastic scenes. The poem “The Second Coming” by William Butler Yeats is full of vibrant imagery. The author uses a dark tone with effective vocabulary to produce such vivid imagery. Each line of the poem is so short but creates such epic scenes in the mind. The imagery in this poem creates a scene of chaos with this dark supernatural beast descending on the world. What does this poem mean though? What is this beast? “The Second Coming” is difficult to analyze just because it can be interpreted in so many ways. This poem describes a gyre which is a symbol for war and goes on to describe a beast which is the signal of a new age. Change is an inevitable result of war.
            When reading the poem “The Second Coming” the eerie imagery the words create is amazing. For example look at the first two lines, “Turning and turning in the widening gyre/The falcon cannot hear the falconer” (Yeats lines 1-2). With this line I imagine a tornado forming, swirling in circles and sucking in the air and clouds around it. This vortex being described must be deafening.  The attention of all the people and animals must be on this unexplained event for even a falcon is prevented from hearing its owner. The gyre is a symbol for war. The author uses the word widening so this means more and more is being affected by the war.
            Destruction is described in the next lines of the poem, it reads, “Things are falling apart; the centre cannot hold/ Mere anarchy is loosed upon the world” (Yeats 3-4). The centre is the past stability of institutions, beliefs, and policies. These things will change as a result of war. Eventually everything will fall because things fall apart. This war is affecting everything and will consume everything. The author uses the word mere which suggests that the only result from this war is chaos and destruction.
            The next two lines in the poem “The Second Coming” reads; “The blood-dimmed tide is loosed, and everywhere/ The ceremony of innocence is drowned” (Yeats lines 5-6). The tide is a symbol of the people dying. The tide will flow over the land; unleashed by the gyre. The people’s innocence is not celebrated anymore. As a result of this tide released from the gyre, the innocence is swept away from the people with the arrival of the dying. The people innocence is gone because it drowned. There is no more innocent because the war took it away.
            In the next lines reads, “The best lack all conviction, while the worst/ Are full of passionate intensity” (Yeats lines 7-8). With this anarchy this war has started there are various people on the different sides. First at the one extreme there are the people who lack all conviction that means they don’t believe in the war that is occurring. They are probably were just trying to survive through it. On the other side are the people who believe the war is just because they are the ones full of passionate intensity. Notice the poem mentions the best and the worst. It seems the writer has taken sides in this conflict. He lacks conviction as well for he makes the assumption that the best people are the ones lacking judgment that this is the right course of action: he doesn’t believe war is justified.
The next lines of the poem describe a beast and a Second Coming. What is the "rough beast"?  What is coming? An event like this was obviously expected because the poem reads “Surely some revelation is at hand/ Surely the Second Coming is at hand” (Yeats lines 9-10). What else could it be? This is the only explanation. The author sounds like he is trying to argue out loud with himself. Later on the author becomes more convinced that this new era is here to stay because the poem says, “The darkness drops again but now I know” (Yeats line 18). The second to last line says, “And what rough beast, its hour come round at last” (Yeats line 21).  It came at last. Maybe the purpose of this poem is to say that this beast could appear at any time. The author must have known that this was going to happen because at first he was surprised and was not completely sure what was happening. Later on in the poem it feels like he had known this change was about to happen.
William Yeats goes on and writes that this beast described in the poem has been in a sleep, “That twenty centuries of stony sleep/ Were vexed to nightmare by a rocking cradle” (lines 19-20). Now these lines are interesting. The beast has been waiting to emerge from sleep for the past two thousand years up till now. While sleeping peacefully the beast has been provoked into a nightmare by the fighting civilizations. Rocking refers to the fighting of the countries over the years. Cradle refers to the earth the beast was sleeping in under where all of humanity has lived. Humanity has been fighting each other and at war which has disturbed the sleep of this beast enough to awaken it.
Now the last line reads “Slouches toward Bethlehem to be born?” (Yeats line 22). This means that this war is igniting a big change and it is only just started with this beast because the beast has not even been born yet. There is a question mark at the end of this last line so it means the author isn’t exactly sure what this beast will do. The beast is a signal of the beginning of a new era.

Works Cited
Yeats, William Butler. "The Second Coming." PotW.org - Poem of the Week. 18 September 2011. Web. <http://www.potw.org/archive/potw351.html>.

Saturday, September 10, 2011

The Second Coming



I read the poem The Second Coming by William Butler Yeats. This poem gave me the strongest reaction compared to the other poems I read just because of the eerie imagery the words put in my mind. The poem in my mind created a scene of chaos with this dark supernatural beast descending on the world. For example in the first line “Turning and turning in the widening gyre the falcon cannot hear the falconer” With this line I imagine a tornado forming, swirling in circles and sucking in the air and clouds around it. This vortex being described must be deafening.  The attention of all the people and animals must be on this unexplained event for even a falcon is prevented from hearing its owner. 

Maybe the purpose of this poem is to say that this surprise could happen at any time. An event like this was obviously expected because the poem reads “Surely some revelation is at hand; surely the Second Coming is at hand.” What else could it be? This is the only explanation. The author sounds like he is trying to argue out loud with himself. Later on he becomes more convinced that this event is here to stay because the poem says “The darkness drops again but now I know.” The second to last line says “and what rough beast, its hour come round at last”.  It came at last. The author must have known that this was going to happen because at first he was surprised but later it feels like he has known this was about to happen. Now the last line reads “Slouches toward Bethlehem to be born?” This means that this incident is igniting a big change and it is only just started with this beast because the beast has not even been born yet.  

Link to help with understanding and explicating poetry.

Saturday, September 3, 2011

Summary vs. Analysis




Explain your understanding of the difference between summary and analysis. Summarizing a text and analyzing a text are two completely different processes from each other. Writing a summary of a story is easy because it does not require any critical thinking like analysis. Summary is defined as the brief retelling of the facts of a story.  We all know the summary is the short restating of the plot, the author's ideas, the characters, etc. The summary is what a story is about while an analysis is what the reader personally thinks the story and certain parts of the story actually means. No one is going to argue with a summary. 

A literary analysis is an argument for a personal interpretation of the text. An Interpretation needs to be backed up with evident or a quote from the story being analyzed. An analysis is not the facts it is more of an opinion about what the whole story means. A reader’s analysis of the reading could be wrong while a summary cannot be wrong. Analysis is breaking down the text into pieces or elements to examine how it affects the meaning of the whole text. 

Link to help distinguish between Summary and Analysis


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