Friday, December 9, 2011

Technology!


This class was different from other classes because of the use of web technologies. Before taking this class I had never uploaded a video or a PowerPoint presentation. I also never created a blog before.
             Online learning is different than in person learning for several reasons. The main reason is I didn’t need to be at a specific place at a certain time to listen to a lecture or to complete work. Without these constraints I could review and start working on assignments whenever I want within a deadline period. Of course with this freedom it can be difficult to find the motivation to get online to start the work because there is no definite schedule of when class starts for the week. Like with physical classes I know I have to go because if I miss one lecture I know I could get behind or not hear important information. With online classes I know all the information is there so there seems no urgency to acquire it.
            The benefit to taking an online English class is that this is a class that doesn’t need to be in person. Most of this class is about reading texts and writing which is something that students can do themselves with little guidance.  There are some classes that need to be taken in person like for instance classes with lab requirements but an English class is not among them.
            When I found out this class was centered partially to posting on a blog weekly I was unsure how it would turn out. With the end of the semester at this point I can see how writing on a blog was a good idea for an online English class. Not only to get feedback from other students but to have all my work together in one place. The comments I received in response to my writing are more critical. I think it’s because it’s an online environment which is helpful in knowing where improvement in my work needs to be made. This is feedback in addition to my instructor. I could realistically see how a blog would be a good way to share my experiences with others so I would feasibly use this median in the future for sharing. This course along with some online technologies I used for the first time was a great help to improving my skills and as a result I’m happy I took this class with Laura Cline as the instructor.


Link to article on why online classes are better.


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Saturday, December 3, 2011

Reflection on the Course


            It’s surprising how fast the semester went by. Even though this online English class went by quickly I feel like I have learned a lot. With the end of the semester here I feel my writing skills have improved greatly compared to the start of the semester. In this class I learned how to look deeper when reading literature, analyzing to look for the meaning and how that affects the rest of the text. I have learned how to better organize my thoughts to write focused statements. After reading and writing about the novel Frankenstein I have a better understanding in looking for multiple meanings and perspectives. I feel like I have made a great improvement in my skills but that’s because my writing wasn’t very good to begin with so any change is going to be a great improvement. With the skills I learned in this class I know I can apply them to not only future college courses I will be taking but also to my future career.
The readings in the class have affected me in a way that it made writing about them easier just because they were interesting. The major readings of the class with the theme of monsters made the writing part of the class easier.  It’s not fun to write about a required reading you find tiresome.
I have met the learning outcomes for the class just by doing all the assignments required. When doing assignments I put effort in writing as best as I can with the continuous revision of my work to make sure that any readers can comprehend my thoughts and ideas. The peer review of other students work has helped not just in understanding the material better but the comments on my work on what I need to improve upon.  As a result of this I feel all of the learning outcomes have been met even if there is always room for me to improve upon.  
My writing process has changed with the realization that just starting my essay will get my train of thought moving. I can also go back to revise and improve my work. The hardest part of writing for me is just getting started. My process has changed with knowing my sentences and ideas have to flow and connect to my main idea/thesis. I try to envision how the reader will interpret the meaning of my words. This changes how I write.
The biggest challenges were just getting thoughts on paper. It’s hard to come up with views because I wanted to get the correct interpretation of the poem “The Second Coming” or the novel “Frankenstein”. I overcame this when realizing there is no true answer and any answer is correct as long as I can provide evidence. After that with any writing assignment I focused on writing what I really thought based on my own opinions instead of looking for the right answer or analysis. I feel this has affected me not just in writing but when dealing with people. I am more likely to say what I feel instead of what I think people want to hear. As a result I feel more authentic. This class was a great help to improving my skills and as a result I’m happy I took this class with Laura Cline as the instructor.

Sunday, November 20, 2011

Critiquing a Critique



In the article, Kyle Bishop starts off by saying that all great literary productions reveal what our cultural anxieties are. He gives examples of this such as movies at the end of World War 2 that show our fear of the use of atomic weapons or the movies made as a result of our fear of the communist threat. Bishop says Zombie cinema is the most revealing of our culture of the recent decade. Zombie cinema has its ups and downs over the years. Recently however there has been a sort of zombie “Renaissance”. There are a bunch of examples of the various movies released in the past few years. The zombie films of the recent decade addresses the social and cultural fears from the terrorist attacks on September 11. Bishop says “Night of the Living Dead” reinvented the zombie from the historical version of a monster of voodoo magic. The frequency of these movies has increased during periods of loss of freedom and autonomy. Starting in the 1980’s zombies became more of a joke and portrayed in comedies. With the peace and stability in the 1990’s the zombie genre declined with movies failing at the box office. The result was few new ideas or stories were produced in the 90’s. Zombies found their way into video games starting in the 90’s. Zombies started showing up in video games, graphic novels, books, and movies. No one recognized this zombie “renaissance” until 2006. The amount of zombies in film, TV and other media makes the genre more complex than mere entertainment. There are reasons why audiences fear these corpses. Zombies cannot be reasoned with, or dissuaded because they have no emotion. They never tire and will kill mercilessly. Zombies are in a state of decay with a human appearance that was once belonged to the living. As a result they personify our own death. The breakdown in the social order in zombies allows the fulfillment of survivalist fantasies. Zombies are animals. The end of the world portray in the zombies film is the greatest fear. Bishop makes comparisons between zombies and terrorists of 9/11. Everyone could be a threat and as a result there is no safety. The zombie is unique because it didn’t start in literature like other monsters but in folklore, drama, and cinema. By forcing viewers to face their fears the zombie narrative is insightful into modern society. 

Link to article on how to survive a zombie attack.

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Sunday, November 13, 2011

Draft of Final Project


Jordan Anderson
Laura Cline
English 102
5 November 2011

Zombies

“It wasn’t wearing a shirt and its mottled gray flesh was all torn and pockmarked. It smelled like the beach, like rotten kelp and saltwater…Tim looked frantically around the room for a weapon just as it grabbed him by the shirt” (Brooks 31). In this fearsome situation where do you turn? Everyone knows what zombies are. Zombies are the decaying undead humans who hunger for human flesh. How anyone can become a zombie is through some form of contact like a bite-mark from an infected human. What threat does a zombie represent to society? In World War Z zombies represents a lot of various fears for people. There is one overlying symbolic idea of zombies though. Zombies represent the loss of free will along with the loss of conscious thought that make people human. This reduces your friends and family into less than humans into mindless animals who stop at nothing to feast on human flesh. Zombies represent the danger of the loss of control and safety. In short zombies threaten what makes each of us human.
Even though they might look like us they are far from what makes us human. It is indeed frightening as I am supported here by Bishop, “The threat is not only manifested as a hostile undead human but likely a hostile undead human the victim recognizes as a former intimate” (Bishop 203). This makes the living fearful. Zombies represent this familiar horror, “Horror is based on recognizing in the unfamiliar something familiar, something attractive even as it is repulsive” (Bishop 203). For the people around us can be infected and the people we have come to love and trust can be reversed very quickly. When our image of our love ones trying to kill us is in front of us the decision to run or kill them is hard.  This image is explained by Bishop, “Although statures, portraits, and photographs are treasured as valued reminders of those now dead, no one really wants to see the face of a loved one slowly rot or be reminded of the brutal realities of morality; such a confrontation would be frightening, to say the least” (Bishop 198). Not only is an undead person frightening but an undead person we used to know is even more frightening. The fear is identifying the human resemblance in the monster.
What if the enemy can’t feel fear? Now that’s fear. In World War Z a soldier discusses why people are fearful of zombies, “It’s fear, dude, just fear and you don’t have to be Sun freakin Tzu to know that real fighting isn’t about killing or even hurting the other guy, it’s about scaring him enough to call it a day” (Brooks 46).
They can’t be stopped because they are already dead hence the only way to kill a zombie is to shoot it through the head. A soldier in World War Z explained that fear, “They’re not afraid! No matter what we do, no matter how many we kill, they will never ever be afraid!” (Brooks 42). They don’t feel pain. They can’t think. Zombies have lost the ability to make choices. There is no right and wrong decisions to be made. The only objective that concerns the infected zombies is to eat living people.
The drop to the level of animalistic instinct is unnerving and emotional.   This is a primitive impulse something we humans think we have overcome. We are above these animal instincts. As a result it makes us question our humanity. With these monsters that never stop there is the realization that there is no safety. There is no place that you can relax. These monsters who hunger for flesh are everywhere that people are.
One infected person can contaminate an entire population. With the population contaminated bishop explains, “In all of these scenarios, the virus, plague, or infestation has been so rapid and completer that cities are quickly overrun, buildings abandoned, posts deserted, and airwaves silenced” (Bishop Dead 21).This is essentially how it starts too. One person becomes a zombie then another and before you know it everyone is your enemy. What can you do with yourself and those you care about? Isolate yourself? Or just kill everyone else before they become infected instead of delaying the inevitable? We depend on others for our survival so this isn’t possible.               
 A zombie isn’t dependent on basic survival like us. They don’t need food. They hunger for food or sustenance but they don’t need it. They don’t need sleep. They have an ability to keep moving without tiring down time or feel the need for rest. Security for itself and avoiding pain isn’t an issue with the undead. The zombie doesn’t have to think or worry about these things.
It’s not just about getting sick and dying. It’s about after dying you can come back as a member of the undead to contaminate others is the fear. When one person gets infected it doesn’t stop. The infection can spread especially if someone knows they are infected. Sometimes the infected can be hard to spot in its early stages. One minute a person is fine and the next he can be gnawing at your arm. This can make people distrustful of each other with knowing that an ally can turn against you without thought. These zombies attack us on a personal level.
There is also the fear of getting eating alive. These zombies don’t give you a quick death. These zombies just want the flesh of humans. That is a horrible way to die with lots of pain. Some are those who see a plan to opt out of this system. They shoot themselves in the head so that they can’t be reanimated and harm others. Also so they don’t have to endure the pain. As a result some just give up. For example in World War Z someone explain why people were dying without actually being sick, “The problem was psychological, a case of just giving up, not wanting to see tomorrow because you knew it could only bring more suffering” (Brooks 68). People become helpless which makes them lose the will to continue.  In the last episode of The Walking Dead one of the characters has this problem. She can’t decide whether she wants to live. Not only does she not want to deal with the suffering of living but she wants the choice of where she dies. With suicide she can decide when it ends.
With zombies there always come the zombie mob and surviving the large group. The movies and TV shows like The Walking Dead demonstrate this. The Walking Dead show focuses on a small group that somehow survives and tries to fight and hide for their survival against a mob of undead. They want to survival this mob of mindless consumption. With these fears zombies evoke we can understand why they are so entertaining to watch. 


Works Cited

Bishop, Kyle. "Dead Man Still Walking." Journal of Popular Film and Television 37.1 (2009): 16-25. ProQuest Research Library. Web. 30 Oct. 2011. http://search.proquest.com.proxy.yc.edu/pqrl/docview/199456220/132BB92FA9B58B12016/2?accountid=31701
Bishop, Kyle. "Raising the Dead." Journal of Popular Film and Television 33.4 (2006): 196-205. Web. ProQuest Research Library. Web. 30 Oct. 2011. http://search.proquest.com.proxy.yc.edu/pqrl/docview/199488557/132BB92FA9B58B12016/5?accountid=31701
Brooks, Max. World War Z: an Oral History of the Zombie War. New York: Crown, 2006. Print.

Sunday, November 6, 2011

Annotated Bibliography


Bishop, Kyle. "Dead Man Still Walking." Journal of Popular Film and Television 37.1 (2009): 16-25. 

ProQuest Research Library. Web. 30 Oct. 2011. 


This is one of my secondary sources. I choose this article because the author goes through the primary characteristics of the zombie genre. The author talks about how the fear of the genre relate to the world events of when certain movies came out. The author talks about how zombies are presented in other mediums other than literature and movies. The author talks how the visual representation is better able to convey fear than if read in a book which I found interesting.

Bishop, Kyle. "Raising the Dead." Journal of Popular Film and Television 33.4 (2006): 196-205. Web. 

ProQuest Research Library. Web. 30 Oct. 2011. 


This is one of my secondary sources. I choose this article because the author explains why zombies are so frightening. The author does a good job of backing up my main points. The author goes through the formula of zombie movies. The author talks about the gore and violence of the zombie movies along with how they can break taboos like cannibalism. Bishop compares the zombie with other monsters.

Brooks, Max. World War Z: an Oral History of the Zombie War. New York: Crown, 2006. Print.

This is my primary source for my essay. In this source the author describes an after account of a zombie apocalypse through interviews. With the interview type setup in the book the author was able to include multiple fictional views around the world on the topic of zombies through personal accounts. With the multiple views the reader can gauge what the threat from these monster represent more clearly. The main reason I chose this as my primary source was because I read it years ago and it was entertaining to read so I was encourage to read it again.

Sunday, October 30, 2011

Final Project Proposal


For my final project I plan to complete option # 2. Essay #4 will be the monster project with the monster being zombies. I chose this option because if I write about something interesting like zombies I will be more motivated to put more effort and time into it. I have experience with reading and watching my primary sources for this project already so I’m already familiar with them. Possible primary sources include the book World War Z, the movie 28 Weeks Later, and the TV show The Walking Dead. With this project I hope to accomplish a deeper understanding of why this type of monster is so entertaining to read about and watch. I also hope to accomplish a well-constructed paper with more fluid paragraphs and sentences with good supporting ideas. For research I plan to specifically use the ProQuest Research Library database, the Yavapai library network and the internet. I want my final project to be amazing and I hope it goes well.


Link to rules for zombie survival.


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Sunday, October 23, 2011

Mid-Term Check In


Dear Professor Cline,

            With taking this online English class I wasn’t sure how much different it would be compared to taking it in a physical classroom. Overall I’m glad this class was available online. With the blogs the class feels more engaging instead of empty like some other online classes. Also reading other students work and their perspectives is helpful.
The biggest challenge in the class I’ve had so far is just starting the writing process. Getting my ideas on paper are always hard. Once I have started writing my breakdown of the reading I can usually keep going. Another challenge I’ve had is differentiating between summary and analysis. It’s so easy to summarize rather than exploring deeper meaning which can be a problem.
I think my biggest success has been my literary analysis of a poem. The way my essay turned out has impressed me. I can still find areas in the essay to make corrections to make it better though. From where I have come from in terms of writing skills to today is amazing. I feel like I have improved.
Well the readings in the class surprised me. Before I read Frankenstein I expected the story would be dull old book but it surprised me. Sure they’re some students who thought it wasn’t great but I enjoyed reading the novel as well as my poem. The novel was full of emotion and there are good thought provoking ideas in there. The book is a classic for a reason. The poem I wrote about was full of rich imagery. Because both readings kept me interested it has made the writing essays about them much easier. I like having the choice about what poem I got to write about.
Literary analysis is different from other types of writing because I actually have to delve deeper into the text to find out the symbols and meanings. Literary analysis is also different because there is no right answer. I just need to provide evident to support my thoughts.
With the second half of the session my goals are to just continue to improve my writing skills. I want to make my final project decent. I want to make my ideas and sentences in essays to flow together better.  I want to make the most out of this class because this is probably the last English class I will ever take. Writing essays is not something I enjoy but I know the only way to improve my skills and abilities are to practice.

Sincerely,
 Jordan Anderson

Sunday, October 16, 2011

Frankenstein in Context


Jordan Anderson
Laura Cline
English 102
15 October, 2011

Frankenstein was a good novel. It surprised me because I kind of thought it was going to be a boring old novel and I didn’t know what to expect. I like how everything seemed to relate to each other. It was interesting. I thought it was full of emotion. I thought it was thought provoking in the sense that I had to stop reading a few times to think about something from the book and how an idea relates to my life. Numerous themes stuck out in the telling of the story. They were the creation of life, the danger of having ambition, loneness, duty, family, guilt, justice, and perspective, purpose of life, sacrifice, revenge, and appearance. I think shelly wanted us to be happy with what we are that we should not strive for ambition but be happy with our relationships with our family and friends because they are what matter most.
We must strive for tranquility. Earlier in the novel Frankenstein it reads, “A human being in perfection ought always to preserve a calm and peaceful mind, and never to allow passion or a transitory desire to disturb his transquillity” (Shelley 33). Even Frankenstein believes this and that many problems in the world wouldn’t have occurred if this was true. His understanding was in retrospect though as a result of telling his story to Walton. Frankenstein understands where his attention should be focused but it’s too late. Mary Poovey writes, “But ironically, the very gesture that disciplines his desire has already destroyed the possibility of reestablishing relationships with his loved ones” (Poovey 255).
Frankenstein sacrifices himself for humanity. He recognizes that he would be selfish if he didn’t. In the novel Frankenstein says, “I shuddered to think that future ages might curse me as their pest, whose selfishness had hesitated to buy its own peace at the price perhaps of the existence of the whole human race” (Shelley 114).  He wouldn’t want to create a female for that if they reproduce they could create a race of hateful monsters. The result could destroy humanity with Frankenstein to blame. He couldn’t live with that.
Frankenstein is devoid of life because all his closest friends and family were dead. Because of this he had no other reason to live. His purpose is to track down and kill his creation. Only then can he die. In the novel he says, “I must pursue and destroy the being to whom I gave existence; then my lot on earth will be fulfilled, and I may die” (Shelley 148). 
Frankenstein becomes a monster just like his creation by the end. I am supported here by Levine when he writes, “As they pursue their separate lives, they increasingly resemble and depend upon each other so that by the end Frankenstein pursues his own monster” (Levine 209). This is all true with all the characters. All the major and minor characters are echoes of each other.  Both Frankenstein and Walton resemble each other. Both are explorers trying to gain knowledge and both have ambition. Walton puts his desires first at the expense of his sister and admits his adventure might end badly. Walton writes in a letter to his sister, “You will not hear of my destruction, and you will anxiously await my return. Years will pass, and you will have visiting of despair, and yet be tortured by hope” (Shelley 148). Frankenstein spent a great amount of his time working on creating life at the expense of his family. His family was worrying from Frankenstein ignoring their letters. This is because Frankenstein placed them second to his interests and desires. Frankenstein advises Walton to learn from him. Walton does learn from Victor, The author writes that because Walton rejects Victor’s wish for vengeance and ends his arctic exploration, “He is finally freed into a better (and perhaps a lesser) life” (Levine 210).
Throughout the whole book we went from this good fortune guy who had a great life but by the end we are at this desolate lifeless arctic environment. “It is the story of two antithetical modes of parenting that give rise to two increasingly parallel lives- the life of Victor Frankenstein, who is the beloved child of two doting parents, and the life of the monster he single-handedly creates, who is immediately spurned and abandoned by his creator” ( Johnson 242). Because Frankenstein’s monster was created and not born he was never a belonging or brought up in a family. From the death of his family Frankenstein becomes like his creation. Levine writes, “What Frankenstein’s ambition costs him is the family connection which makes life humanly possible” (Levine 213). In the desolate artic Frankenstein dies with his thirst for revenge unsatisfied.  He gives advice for Walton, the arctic explorer.
I thought the novel did a good job of putting the emotions of the characters out there. Sure most of these emotions were depressing. I knew at some point that the monster would kill the rest of his family but I was just waiting for him to act. He could strike at any moment and Frankenstein didn’t have much protection or much of anything he could do about it. Frankenstein lives in fear and so carried weapons but it didn’t do him any good, “I carried pistols and a dagger constantly about me, and was ever on the watch to prevent artifice; and by these means gained a greater degree of tranquility” (Shelley 133).
Frankenstein’s monster just wanted a connection with another being but that connection would never occur for various reasons. One reason was that he was eight feet tall and hideous looking. His appearance is the reason for being treated as an outcast. He looks the part so he became the part; He becomes the monster everyone thinks he is. Was this his destiny? He put all this work into understanding language and he became part of the family for the time. With the monster wanting connection, he later asks his creator to create another female monster he could share with and he would be happy and live in exile. This is all he needs but he is denied this. Victor Frankenstein does not want to create another monster.
Everyone strives for connection. The monster’s sole wish is to have a companion. After the speaking his story of how he came to be, the monster explains to Frankenstein, “You must create a female for me, with whom I can live in the interchange of those sympathies necessary for my being” (Shelley 98). While Frankenstein had these connections growing up, he didn’t realize this was all he needed.  He wanted more when he had all he needed and after the fact that he created the monster he realizes this.
Frankenstein hid the secret for creating life because some things are meant to be unknown because they can cause a lot of problems. After Walton asks how exactly the creature was made Frankenstein responds with, “Or to what do your questions tend? Peace, peace! Learn my miseries, and do not seek to increase your own” (Shelley 146).  This relates to the time period though and historical and author background. Science of the time wasn’t too advanced. Scientists thought that to create life, “A mysterious superadded force was needed, some subtile, mobile, invisible substance, analogous on the one hand to soul and on the other to electricity” (Butler 304).
The monster just wanted what Frankenstein had all along. If his demands weren’t met then he would make Frankenstein suffer, “I will revenge my injuries: if I cannot inspire love, I will cause fear; and chiefly towards you my arch-enemy, because my creator, do I swear inextinguishable hatred” (Shelley 98). Frankenstein refuses his demands. As a result the monster takes away all those he loved. With all his family members dead, Victor has no reason to live. Shelley wanted to show how ambition can lead to neglecting the meaningful relationships.
Works Cited

Shelley, Mary. Frankenstein. Ed. J. P. Hunter. New York: Norton & Company, 1996. Print.
Levine, George. "Frankenstein and the Tradition of Realism." Frankenstein.  Ed. J. P. Hunter. New York: Norton & Company, 1996. 208-214. Print.
Johnson, Barbara. “My Monster/My Self.” Frankenstein.  Ed. J. P. Hunter. New York: Norton & Company, 1996. 241-251. Print.
Poovey, Mary. “My Hideous Progeny: The Lady and the Monster.” Frankenstein.   Ed. J. P. Hunter. New York: Norton & Company, 1996. 251-261. Print.
Butler, Marilyn. “Frankenstein and Radical Science.” Frankenstein.  Ed. J. P. Hunter. New York: Norton & Company, 1996. 302-313. Print.


Sunday, October 9, 2011

Summary of a Critical Response


I chose to summarize the article “Frankenstein and the Tradition of Realism” written by George Levine in 1973. The article mentions that the character of Frankenstein was punished for his ambition. He is cited as it was evil to aspire to greatness. Levine writes that, “fear and distrust of those who act on such ambition.” The author goes on to say that evil is usually a “consequence of maltreatment or injustice” but that the evil of Frankenstein was chance. Numerous characters in the novel are similar to each other. In the article the author writes that Frankenstein and his monster are, “two aspects of the same being.” The lessons that were given to Walton towards the end of the novel by Frankenstein were that he must sacrifice his ambition to others but also to reject Frankenstein’s last wish for vengeance. The author writes that because Walton rejects the wish for vengeance, “He is finally freed into a better (and perhaps a lesser) life.” All the major and minor characters are echoes of each other. The author writes that the novel is about one mind and not the landscape even when it travels to all these exotic destinations. Frankenstein failed in his responsibility to his creation. At the end Levine writes that the monster has final peace in his destruction.
                I think this article would be good enough to use in Essay #3. George Levine read Frankenstein differently from me but there was some overlap which I liked. The author talks about the similarity and contrast of the characters and their relationships along with Walton being freed from the destruction caused by his ambition. This overlap made the article more interesting. The author of the article took some of my simpler thoughts and went deeper into the novel in his analysis than I did. From reading George Levine's article I learned more about some of the obvious deeper meanings that I did not pick up on when I read Frankenstein.


Link to introduction on Gothic fiction.
Brief history on Gothic fiction link here.


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Sunday, October 2, 2011

Reflections on Revision



My writing process is usually long and difficult. At first I just try to get my thoughts written down so I can expand on them later. The problem is just getting starting by writing a first paragraph. After the first paragraph I can just keep writing because my mind gets focused. When analyzing the poem in my essay I tried to take the poem line by line to analyze how the specific parts are significant and meaningful to the whole story. I do this with an interpretation. I ask questions like what is the deeper meaning here?
With my first draft in progress I usually revise my work while writing by focusing on clarity to make my ideas clearer to the reader. This is important to readers that my ideas are clear and my main points are understood. When revising I concentrate on making my sentences and paragraphs flow more together. For me with my writing process I am constantly revising my paper because I have to. My Paper starts out as a bunch of ideas that I try to turn into a readable paper. Revising a draft is important because I can always go back to reread what I wrote and finds ways to improve it. I revise almost everything I write because it has become a habit. I want readers to understand my writing and the points I’m attempting to make. I think attention to detail is important when revising because little things like punctuation and grammar can show whether I really care enough to put any effort in.
Revising has the benefits of looking at the whole picture and how your main points relate instead of what thoughts came first. Another added benefit of revising is finding out what information I put in the first draft that I can take out and still get the same point across.  
For my Essay #2 I plan to make some significant revisions. Specifically to improve my essay I want to work on the flow and sophistication of my paper. I will do this by writing strong clear topic sentences for each paragraph. My analysis of “The Second Coming” will be expanded upon by providing what my interpretation of the beast is. In my earlier draft I didn’t write a conclusion that wraps up my main points so I will need to fix that in my revision. I want to make my essay more interesting by putting in more concrete details along with more sentence variation instead of abstract ideas and generalizations. 

Link to some advice and questions to ask yourself when revising.



Sunday, September 25, 2011

Close Reading of a Passage


“But where were my friends and relations? No father had watched my infant days, no mother had blessed me with smiles and caresses; or if they had, all my past life was now a blot, a blind vacancy in which I distinguished nothing. From my earliest remembrance I had been as I then was in height and proportion. I had never yet seen a being resembling me, or who claimed any intercourse with me. What was I? The question again recurred, to be answered only with groans,” (Shelley 81).

The above passage stood out in the novel Frankenstein as being important. This passage highlights the monster’s struggle within him as he tries to find meaning, purpose, and his place in the world. At this point in the story the monster not sure about his place in the world. His beginnings are a stark contrast to his creator Frankenstein’s childhood described earlier in the tale. Frankenstein grew up happy with his family and companions. The monster never grew up with a family or friends so he has never had any relationships with others. No one has shown him affection or interaction.  
The monster struggles with the realization that he’s alone and people hate him. He tries to understand the world because he is curious. This passage shows he wants to know who he is and his place in the world. Later on he realizes how alone he is even with his “protectors “nearby. He has no link to others as he can only communicate with “groans”. He is an ugly wretched looking monster and wants to know why his creator did this to him. And he feels helpless because no one taught him how to survive. He becomes angry and blames mankind. His hatred is created from humans treating him as a monster. He isn’t a monster but he feels pushed to become this.
Humans will not give this creature the companionship he craves. He later asks his creator Frankenstein to create a companion because he needs another being like himself to share the world with who won’t hate him. This passage contributes to the meaning of the novel by providing the monster’s thoughts on his backstory with the fact that he came from nothing.   

Link to an article on why loneliness is bad. 

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Sunday, September 18, 2011

Draft of Essay #2


The Second Coming: Analysis

“Turning and turning in the widening gyre/ The falcon cannot hear the falconer” (Yeats lines 1-2). Starting right with the first two lines of the poem the correct use of language by the author is used to evoke such fantastic scenes. The poem “The Second Coming” by William Butler Yeats is full of vibrant imagery. The author uses a dark tone with effective vocabulary to produce such vivid imagery. Each line of the poem is so short but creates such epic scenes in the mind. The imagery in this poem creates a scene of chaos with this dark supernatural beast descending on the world. What does this poem mean though? What is this beast? “The Second Coming” is difficult to analyze just because it can be interpreted in so many ways. This poem describes a gyre which is a symbol for war and goes on to describe a beast which is the signal of a new age. Change is an inevitable result of war.
            When reading the poem “The Second Coming” the eerie imagery the words create is amazing. For example look at the first two lines, “Turning and turning in the widening gyre/The falcon cannot hear the falconer” (Yeats lines 1-2). With this line I imagine a tornado forming, swirling in circles and sucking in the air and clouds around it. This vortex being described must be deafening.  The attention of all the people and animals must be on this unexplained event for even a falcon is prevented from hearing its owner. The gyre is a symbol for war. The author uses the word widening so this means more and more is being affected by the war.
            Destruction is described in the next lines of the poem, it reads, “Things are falling apart; the centre cannot hold/ Mere anarchy is loosed upon the world” (Yeats 3-4). The centre is the past stability of institutions, beliefs, and policies. These things will change as a result of war. Eventually everything will fall because things fall apart. This war is affecting everything and will consume everything. The author uses the word mere which suggests that the only result from this war is chaos and destruction.
            The next two lines in the poem “The Second Coming” reads; “The blood-dimmed tide is loosed, and everywhere/ The ceremony of innocence is drowned” (Yeats lines 5-6). The tide is a symbol of the people dying. The tide will flow over the land; unleashed by the gyre. The people’s innocence is not celebrated anymore. As a result of this tide released from the gyre, the innocence is swept away from the people with the arrival of the dying. The people innocence is gone because it drowned. There is no more innocent because the war took it away.
            In the next lines reads, “The best lack all conviction, while the worst/ Are full of passionate intensity” (Yeats lines 7-8). With this anarchy this war has started there are various people on the different sides. First at the one extreme there are the people who lack all conviction that means they don’t believe in the war that is occurring. They are probably were just trying to survive through it. On the other side are the people who believe the war is just because they are the ones full of passionate intensity. Notice the poem mentions the best and the worst. It seems the writer has taken sides in this conflict. He lacks conviction as well for he makes the assumption that the best people are the ones lacking judgment that this is the right course of action: he doesn’t believe war is justified.
The next lines of the poem describe a beast and a Second Coming. What is the "rough beast"?  What is coming? An event like this was obviously expected because the poem reads “Surely some revelation is at hand/ Surely the Second Coming is at hand” (Yeats lines 9-10). What else could it be? This is the only explanation. The author sounds like he is trying to argue out loud with himself. Later on the author becomes more convinced that this new era is here to stay because the poem says, “The darkness drops again but now I know” (Yeats line 18). The second to last line says, “And what rough beast, its hour come round at last” (Yeats line 21).  It came at last. Maybe the purpose of this poem is to say that this beast could appear at any time. The author must have known that this was going to happen because at first he was surprised and was not completely sure what was happening. Later on in the poem it feels like he had known this change was about to happen.
William Yeats goes on and writes that this beast described in the poem has been in a sleep, “That twenty centuries of stony sleep/ Were vexed to nightmare by a rocking cradle” (lines 19-20). Now these lines are interesting. The beast has been waiting to emerge from sleep for the past two thousand years up till now. While sleeping peacefully the beast has been provoked into a nightmare by the fighting civilizations. Rocking refers to the fighting of the countries over the years. Cradle refers to the earth the beast was sleeping in under where all of humanity has lived. Humanity has been fighting each other and at war which has disturbed the sleep of this beast enough to awaken it.
Now the last line reads “Slouches toward Bethlehem to be born?” (Yeats line 22). This means that this war is igniting a big change and it is only just started with this beast because the beast has not even been born yet. There is a question mark at the end of this last line so it means the author isn’t exactly sure what this beast will do. The beast is a signal of the beginning of a new era.

Works Cited
Yeats, William Butler. "The Second Coming." PotW.org - Poem of the Week. 18 September 2011. Web. <http://www.potw.org/archive/potw351.html>.

Saturday, September 10, 2011

The Second Coming



I read the poem The Second Coming by William Butler Yeats. This poem gave me the strongest reaction compared to the other poems I read just because of the eerie imagery the words put in my mind. The poem in my mind created a scene of chaos with this dark supernatural beast descending on the world. For example in the first line “Turning and turning in the widening gyre the falcon cannot hear the falconer” With this line I imagine a tornado forming, swirling in circles and sucking in the air and clouds around it. This vortex being described must be deafening.  The attention of all the people and animals must be on this unexplained event for even a falcon is prevented from hearing its owner. 

Maybe the purpose of this poem is to say that this surprise could happen at any time. An event like this was obviously expected because the poem reads “Surely some revelation is at hand; surely the Second Coming is at hand.” What else could it be? This is the only explanation. The author sounds like he is trying to argue out loud with himself. Later on he becomes more convinced that this event is here to stay because the poem says “The darkness drops again but now I know.” The second to last line says “and what rough beast, its hour come round at last”.  It came at last. The author must have known that this was going to happen because at first he was surprised but later it feels like he has known this was about to happen. Now the last line reads “Slouches toward Bethlehem to be born?” This means that this incident is igniting a big change and it is only just started with this beast because the beast has not even been born yet.  

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Saturday, September 3, 2011

Summary vs. Analysis




Explain your understanding of the difference between summary and analysis. Summarizing a text and analyzing a text are two completely different processes from each other. Writing a summary of a story is easy because it does not require any critical thinking like analysis. Summary is defined as the brief retelling of the facts of a story.  We all know the summary is the short restating of the plot, the author's ideas, the characters, etc. The summary is what a story is about while an analysis is what the reader personally thinks the story and certain parts of the story actually means. No one is going to argue with a summary. 

A literary analysis is an argument for a personal interpretation of the text. An Interpretation needs to be backed up with evident or a quote from the story being analyzed. An analysis is not the facts it is more of an opinion about what the whole story means. A reader’s analysis of the reading could be wrong while a summary cannot be wrong. Analysis is breaking down the text into pieces or elements to examine how it affects the meaning of the whole text. 

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