Sunday, October 30, 2011

Final Project Proposal


For my final project I plan to complete option # 2. Essay #4 will be the monster project with the monster being zombies. I chose this option because if I write about something interesting like zombies I will be more motivated to put more effort and time into it. I have experience with reading and watching my primary sources for this project already so I’m already familiar with them. Possible primary sources include the book World War Z, the movie 28 Weeks Later, and the TV show The Walking Dead. With this project I hope to accomplish a deeper understanding of why this type of monster is so entertaining to read about and watch. I also hope to accomplish a well-constructed paper with more fluid paragraphs and sentences with good supporting ideas. For research I plan to specifically use the ProQuest Research Library database, the Yavapai library network and the internet. I want my final project to be amazing and I hope it goes well.


Link to rules for zombie survival.


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Sunday, October 23, 2011

Mid-Term Check In


Dear Professor Cline,

            With taking this online English class I wasn’t sure how much different it would be compared to taking it in a physical classroom. Overall I’m glad this class was available online. With the blogs the class feels more engaging instead of empty like some other online classes. Also reading other students work and their perspectives is helpful.
The biggest challenge in the class I’ve had so far is just starting the writing process. Getting my ideas on paper are always hard. Once I have started writing my breakdown of the reading I can usually keep going. Another challenge I’ve had is differentiating between summary and analysis. It’s so easy to summarize rather than exploring deeper meaning which can be a problem.
I think my biggest success has been my literary analysis of a poem. The way my essay turned out has impressed me. I can still find areas in the essay to make corrections to make it better though. From where I have come from in terms of writing skills to today is amazing. I feel like I have improved.
Well the readings in the class surprised me. Before I read Frankenstein I expected the story would be dull old book but it surprised me. Sure they’re some students who thought it wasn’t great but I enjoyed reading the novel as well as my poem. The novel was full of emotion and there are good thought provoking ideas in there. The book is a classic for a reason. The poem I wrote about was full of rich imagery. Because both readings kept me interested it has made the writing essays about them much easier. I like having the choice about what poem I got to write about.
Literary analysis is different from other types of writing because I actually have to delve deeper into the text to find out the symbols and meanings. Literary analysis is also different because there is no right answer. I just need to provide evident to support my thoughts.
With the second half of the session my goals are to just continue to improve my writing skills. I want to make my final project decent. I want to make my ideas and sentences in essays to flow together better.  I want to make the most out of this class because this is probably the last English class I will ever take. Writing essays is not something I enjoy but I know the only way to improve my skills and abilities are to practice.

Sincerely,
 Jordan Anderson

Sunday, October 16, 2011

Frankenstein in Context


Jordan Anderson
Laura Cline
English 102
15 October, 2011

Frankenstein was a good novel. It surprised me because I kind of thought it was going to be a boring old novel and I didn’t know what to expect. I like how everything seemed to relate to each other. It was interesting. I thought it was full of emotion. I thought it was thought provoking in the sense that I had to stop reading a few times to think about something from the book and how an idea relates to my life. Numerous themes stuck out in the telling of the story. They were the creation of life, the danger of having ambition, loneness, duty, family, guilt, justice, and perspective, purpose of life, sacrifice, revenge, and appearance. I think shelly wanted us to be happy with what we are that we should not strive for ambition but be happy with our relationships with our family and friends because they are what matter most.
We must strive for tranquility. Earlier in the novel Frankenstein it reads, “A human being in perfection ought always to preserve a calm and peaceful mind, and never to allow passion or a transitory desire to disturb his transquillity” (Shelley 33). Even Frankenstein believes this and that many problems in the world wouldn’t have occurred if this was true. His understanding was in retrospect though as a result of telling his story to Walton. Frankenstein understands where his attention should be focused but it’s too late. Mary Poovey writes, “But ironically, the very gesture that disciplines his desire has already destroyed the possibility of reestablishing relationships with his loved ones” (Poovey 255).
Frankenstein sacrifices himself for humanity. He recognizes that he would be selfish if he didn’t. In the novel Frankenstein says, “I shuddered to think that future ages might curse me as their pest, whose selfishness had hesitated to buy its own peace at the price perhaps of the existence of the whole human race” (Shelley 114).  He wouldn’t want to create a female for that if they reproduce they could create a race of hateful monsters. The result could destroy humanity with Frankenstein to blame. He couldn’t live with that.
Frankenstein is devoid of life because all his closest friends and family were dead. Because of this he had no other reason to live. His purpose is to track down and kill his creation. Only then can he die. In the novel he says, “I must pursue and destroy the being to whom I gave existence; then my lot on earth will be fulfilled, and I may die” (Shelley 148). 
Frankenstein becomes a monster just like his creation by the end. I am supported here by Levine when he writes, “As they pursue their separate lives, they increasingly resemble and depend upon each other so that by the end Frankenstein pursues his own monster” (Levine 209). This is all true with all the characters. All the major and minor characters are echoes of each other.  Both Frankenstein and Walton resemble each other. Both are explorers trying to gain knowledge and both have ambition. Walton puts his desires first at the expense of his sister and admits his adventure might end badly. Walton writes in a letter to his sister, “You will not hear of my destruction, and you will anxiously await my return. Years will pass, and you will have visiting of despair, and yet be tortured by hope” (Shelley 148). Frankenstein spent a great amount of his time working on creating life at the expense of his family. His family was worrying from Frankenstein ignoring their letters. This is because Frankenstein placed them second to his interests and desires. Frankenstein advises Walton to learn from him. Walton does learn from Victor, The author writes that because Walton rejects Victor’s wish for vengeance and ends his arctic exploration, “He is finally freed into a better (and perhaps a lesser) life” (Levine 210).
Throughout the whole book we went from this good fortune guy who had a great life but by the end we are at this desolate lifeless arctic environment. “It is the story of two antithetical modes of parenting that give rise to two increasingly parallel lives- the life of Victor Frankenstein, who is the beloved child of two doting parents, and the life of the monster he single-handedly creates, who is immediately spurned and abandoned by his creator” ( Johnson 242). Because Frankenstein’s monster was created and not born he was never a belonging or brought up in a family. From the death of his family Frankenstein becomes like his creation. Levine writes, “What Frankenstein’s ambition costs him is the family connection which makes life humanly possible” (Levine 213). In the desolate artic Frankenstein dies with his thirst for revenge unsatisfied.  He gives advice for Walton, the arctic explorer.
I thought the novel did a good job of putting the emotions of the characters out there. Sure most of these emotions were depressing. I knew at some point that the monster would kill the rest of his family but I was just waiting for him to act. He could strike at any moment and Frankenstein didn’t have much protection or much of anything he could do about it. Frankenstein lives in fear and so carried weapons but it didn’t do him any good, “I carried pistols and a dagger constantly about me, and was ever on the watch to prevent artifice; and by these means gained a greater degree of tranquility” (Shelley 133).
Frankenstein’s monster just wanted a connection with another being but that connection would never occur for various reasons. One reason was that he was eight feet tall and hideous looking. His appearance is the reason for being treated as an outcast. He looks the part so he became the part; He becomes the monster everyone thinks he is. Was this his destiny? He put all this work into understanding language and he became part of the family for the time. With the monster wanting connection, he later asks his creator to create another female monster he could share with and he would be happy and live in exile. This is all he needs but he is denied this. Victor Frankenstein does not want to create another monster.
Everyone strives for connection. The monster’s sole wish is to have a companion. After the speaking his story of how he came to be, the monster explains to Frankenstein, “You must create a female for me, with whom I can live in the interchange of those sympathies necessary for my being” (Shelley 98). While Frankenstein had these connections growing up, he didn’t realize this was all he needed.  He wanted more when he had all he needed and after the fact that he created the monster he realizes this.
Frankenstein hid the secret for creating life because some things are meant to be unknown because they can cause a lot of problems. After Walton asks how exactly the creature was made Frankenstein responds with, “Or to what do your questions tend? Peace, peace! Learn my miseries, and do not seek to increase your own” (Shelley 146).  This relates to the time period though and historical and author background. Science of the time wasn’t too advanced. Scientists thought that to create life, “A mysterious superadded force was needed, some subtile, mobile, invisible substance, analogous on the one hand to soul and on the other to electricity” (Butler 304).
The monster just wanted what Frankenstein had all along. If his demands weren’t met then he would make Frankenstein suffer, “I will revenge my injuries: if I cannot inspire love, I will cause fear; and chiefly towards you my arch-enemy, because my creator, do I swear inextinguishable hatred” (Shelley 98). Frankenstein refuses his demands. As a result the monster takes away all those he loved. With all his family members dead, Victor has no reason to live. Shelley wanted to show how ambition can lead to neglecting the meaningful relationships.
Works Cited

Shelley, Mary. Frankenstein. Ed. J. P. Hunter. New York: Norton & Company, 1996. Print.
Levine, George. "Frankenstein and the Tradition of Realism." Frankenstein.  Ed. J. P. Hunter. New York: Norton & Company, 1996. 208-214. Print.
Johnson, Barbara. “My Monster/My Self.” Frankenstein.  Ed. J. P. Hunter. New York: Norton & Company, 1996. 241-251. Print.
Poovey, Mary. “My Hideous Progeny: The Lady and the Monster.” Frankenstein.   Ed. J. P. Hunter. New York: Norton & Company, 1996. 251-261. Print.
Butler, Marilyn. “Frankenstein and Radical Science.” Frankenstein.  Ed. J. P. Hunter. New York: Norton & Company, 1996. 302-313. Print.


Sunday, October 9, 2011

Summary of a Critical Response


I chose to summarize the article “Frankenstein and the Tradition of Realism” written by George Levine in 1973. The article mentions that the character of Frankenstein was punished for his ambition. He is cited as it was evil to aspire to greatness. Levine writes that, “fear and distrust of those who act on such ambition.” The author goes on to say that evil is usually a “consequence of maltreatment or injustice” but that the evil of Frankenstein was chance. Numerous characters in the novel are similar to each other. In the article the author writes that Frankenstein and his monster are, “two aspects of the same being.” The lessons that were given to Walton towards the end of the novel by Frankenstein were that he must sacrifice his ambition to others but also to reject Frankenstein’s last wish for vengeance. The author writes that because Walton rejects the wish for vengeance, “He is finally freed into a better (and perhaps a lesser) life.” All the major and minor characters are echoes of each other. The author writes that the novel is about one mind and not the landscape even when it travels to all these exotic destinations. Frankenstein failed in his responsibility to his creation. At the end Levine writes that the monster has final peace in his destruction.
                I think this article would be good enough to use in Essay #3. George Levine read Frankenstein differently from me but there was some overlap which I liked. The author talks about the similarity and contrast of the characters and their relationships along with Walton being freed from the destruction caused by his ambition. This overlap made the article more interesting. The author of the article took some of my simpler thoughts and went deeper into the novel in his analysis than I did. From reading George Levine's article I learned more about some of the obvious deeper meanings that I did not pick up on when I read Frankenstein.


Link to introduction on Gothic fiction.
Brief history on Gothic fiction link here.


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Sunday, October 2, 2011

Reflections on Revision



My writing process is usually long and difficult. At first I just try to get my thoughts written down so I can expand on them later. The problem is just getting starting by writing a first paragraph. After the first paragraph I can just keep writing because my mind gets focused. When analyzing the poem in my essay I tried to take the poem line by line to analyze how the specific parts are significant and meaningful to the whole story. I do this with an interpretation. I ask questions like what is the deeper meaning here?
With my first draft in progress I usually revise my work while writing by focusing on clarity to make my ideas clearer to the reader. This is important to readers that my ideas are clear and my main points are understood. When revising I concentrate on making my sentences and paragraphs flow more together. For me with my writing process I am constantly revising my paper because I have to. My Paper starts out as a bunch of ideas that I try to turn into a readable paper. Revising a draft is important because I can always go back to reread what I wrote and finds ways to improve it. I revise almost everything I write because it has become a habit. I want readers to understand my writing and the points I’m attempting to make. I think attention to detail is important when revising because little things like punctuation and grammar can show whether I really care enough to put any effort in.
Revising has the benefits of looking at the whole picture and how your main points relate instead of what thoughts came first. Another added benefit of revising is finding out what information I put in the first draft that I can take out and still get the same point across.  
For my Essay #2 I plan to make some significant revisions. Specifically to improve my essay I want to work on the flow and sophistication of my paper. I will do this by writing strong clear topic sentences for each paragraph. My analysis of “The Second Coming” will be expanded upon by providing what my interpretation of the beast is. In my earlier draft I didn’t write a conclusion that wraps up my main points so I will need to fix that in my revision. I want to make my essay more interesting by putting in more concrete details along with more sentence variation instead of abstract ideas and generalizations. 

Link to some advice and questions to ask yourself when revising.



Sunday, September 25, 2011

Close Reading of a Passage


“But where were my friends and relations? No father had watched my infant days, no mother had blessed me with smiles and caresses; or if they had, all my past life was now a blot, a blind vacancy in which I distinguished nothing. From my earliest remembrance I had been as I then was in height and proportion. I had never yet seen a being resembling me, or who claimed any intercourse with me. What was I? The question again recurred, to be answered only with groans,” (Shelley 81).

The above passage stood out in the novel Frankenstein as being important. This passage highlights the monster’s struggle within him as he tries to find meaning, purpose, and his place in the world. At this point in the story the monster not sure about his place in the world. His beginnings are a stark contrast to his creator Frankenstein’s childhood described earlier in the tale. Frankenstein grew up happy with his family and companions. The monster never grew up with a family or friends so he has never had any relationships with others. No one has shown him affection or interaction.  
The monster struggles with the realization that he’s alone and people hate him. He tries to understand the world because he is curious. This passage shows he wants to know who he is and his place in the world. Later on he realizes how alone he is even with his “protectors “nearby. He has no link to others as he can only communicate with “groans”. He is an ugly wretched looking monster and wants to know why his creator did this to him. And he feels helpless because no one taught him how to survive. He becomes angry and blames mankind. His hatred is created from humans treating him as a monster. He isn’t a monster but he feels pushed to become this.
Humans will not give this creature the companionship he craves. He later asks his creator Frankenstein to create a companion because he needs another being like himself to share the world with who won’t hate him. This passage contributes to the meaning of the novel by providing the monster’s thoughts on his backstory with the fact that he came from nothing.   

Link to an article on why loneliness is bad. 

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Sunday, September 18, 2011

Draft of Essay #2


The Second Coming: Analysis

“Turning and turning in the widening gyre/ The falcon cannot hear the falconer” (Yeats lines 1-2). Starting right with the first two lines of the poem the correct use of language by the author is used to evoke such fantastic scenes. The poem “The Second Coming” by William Butler Yeats is full of vibrant imagery. The author uses a dark tone with effective vocabulary to produce such vivid imagery. Each line of the poem is so short but creates such epic scenes in the mind. The imagery in this poem creates a scene of chaos with this dark supernatural beast descending on the world. What does this poem mean though? What is this beast? “The Second Coming” is difficult to analyze just because it can be interpreted in so many ways. This poem describes a gyre which is a symbol for war and goes on to describe a beast which is the signal of a new age. Change is an inevitable result of war.
            When reading the poem “The Second Coming” the eerie imagery the words create is amazing. For example look at the first two lines, “Turning and turning in the widening gyre/The falcon cannot hear the falconer” (Yeats lines 1-2). With this line I imagine a tornado forming, swirling in circles and sucking in the air and clouds around it. This vortex being described must be deafening.  The attention of all the people and animals must be on this unexplained event for even a falcon is prevented from hearing its owner. The gyre is a symbol for war. The author uses the word widening so this means more and more is being affected by the war.
            Destruction is described in the next lines of the poem, it reads, “Things are falling apart; the centre cannot hold/ Mere anarchy is loosed upon the world” (Yeats 3-4). The centre is the past stability of institutions, beliefs, and policies. These things will change as a result of war. Eventually everything will fall because things fall apart. This war is affecting everything and will consume everything. The author uses the word mere which suggests that the only result from this war is chaos and destruction.
            The next two lines in the poem “The Second Coming” reads; “The blood-dimmed tide is loosed, and everywhere/ The ceremony of innocence is drowned” (Yeats lines 5-6). The tide is a symbol of the people dying. The tide will flow over the land; unleashed by the gyre. The people’s innocence is not celebrated anymore. As a result of this tide released from the gyre, the innocence is swept away from the people with the arrival of the dying. The people innocence is gone because it drowned. There is no more innocent because the war took it away.
            In the next lines reads, “The best lack all conviction, while the worst/ Are full of passionate intensity” (Yeats lines 7-8). With this anarchy this war has started there are various people on the different sides. First at the one extreme there are the people who lack all conviction that means they don’t believe in the war that is occurring. They are probably were just trying to survive through it. On the other side are the people who believe the war is just because they are the ones full of passionate intensity. Notice the poem mentions the best and the worst. It seems the writer has taken sides in this conflict. He lacks conviction as well for he makes the assumption that the best people are the ones lacking judgment that this is the right course of action: he doesn’t believe war is justified.
The next lines of the poem describe a beast and a Second Coming. What is the "rough beast"?  What is coming? An event like this was obviously expected because the poem reads “Surely some revelation is at hand/ Surely the Second Coming is at hand” (Yeats lines 9-10). What else could it be? This is the only explanation. The author sounds like he is trying to argue out loud with himself. Later on the author becomes more convinced that this new era is here to stay because the poem says, “The darkness drops again but now I know” (Yeats line 18). The second to last line says, “And what rough beast, its hour come round at last” (Yeats line 21).  It came at last. Maybe the purpose of this poem is to say that this beast could appear at any time. The author must have known that this was going to happen because at first he was surprised and was not completely sure what was happening. Later on in the poem it feels like he had known this change was about to happen.
William Yeats goes on and writes that this beast described in the poem has been in a sleep, “That twenty centuries of stony sleep/ Were vexed to nightmare by a rocking cradle” (lines 19-20). Now these lines are interesting. The beast has been waiting to emerge from sleep for the past two thousand years up till now. While sleeping peacefully the beast has been provoked into a nightmare by the fighting civilizations. Rocking refers to the fighting of the countries over the years. Cradle refers to the earth the beast was sleeping in under where all of humanity has lived. Humanity has been fighting each other and at war which has disturbed the sleep of this beast enough to awaken it.
Now the last line reads “Slouches toward Bethlehem to be born?” (Yeats line 22). This means that this war is igniting a big change and it is only just started with this beast because the beast has not even been born yet. There is a question mark at the end of this last line so it means the author isn’t exactly sure what this beast will do. The beast is a signal of the beginning of a new era.

Works Cited
Yeats, William Butler. "The Second Coming." PotW.org - Poem of the Week. 18 September 2011. Web. <http://www.potw.org/archive/potw351.html>.